Saffron Gym was tall and well built, looking alot like a seven story doll house, but it was a gym, which meant a battle for a badge. But a girl, blonde with a pony-tail, jumped from the rafters when Ash entered.
"Let me see your hand" She said. She looked at his out-stretched hand.
"Tsk tsk tsk, you haven't long... You won't win your next
battle...Hmm...You have a deep love....There's a break in your life
line, someone is going to die!...." She said. Ash, however, was looking
rather retarted. "What the heck are you talking about?" Ash asked,
puzzled.
"Your Fate, its all layed out for you. There's no way to change fate
after its been layed out." She said.
"I've come to face Sabrina, where is she?" Ash Asked.
"That way...But you can't battle.. Your fate says you'll get stomped/"
She stammered.
Ash stomped into the large battle room.
"Hello, Ash, I've been expecting you. One Pokemon, Abra I chosse you!"
She said.
Ash, wondering how she knew his name, yelled "I chosse you, Pikachu!"
And Pikachu came out.
Abra used its teleport when Pikachu used Thunderbolt, lighting the dark gym with an errie light. Abra used Slam, and Pikachu got hit. Hard. Pikachu, dancing around on one leg, was wailing in pain.
Abra used the tail-wag, and Pikachu was hit.
"THUNDER NOW" Ash yelled, and Pikachu did as it was bid.
The thunder busted the gym, and Ash was thrown backwards, onto the wall.
He hit the door hard, but stared at Pikachu through the pain.
It was running around the room, being chased by its own attack! A thunder gyarados was chasing it. It shocked Pikachu, but Pikachu stayed some-what consious.
"Finish it Abra, a Psychic" Commanded Sabrina, and Pikachu was hit. Blacked out.
Ash ran up to it. It wasn't breathing. It was dead. "Pika....Pikachu...." He gasped, tears running down his cheeks. "This...this can't happen...Wake up" He said. Something happened, a shock hit Ash sending him flying, again, into the wall.
Something lifted out of Pikachu, a trasparent Pika! It was Pikachu's
spirit. It shocked Abra. Abra uses psychic, no dice, Pikachu was a
ghost. 50 shocks later, Abra gave away. Ash won.
"YAHOOO!" He yelled.
Pikachu then floated through the celling to the heavens. The blonde Ash had seen ran in. Sabrina teleported.
"Ash, I was wrong." She said. "Fate is what you decide to do next."
The END.
Review: WAAAA!!!! TELL ME THE PIKA COMES BACK!!!!
Grade: Sob...F!! Don't kill Pikas!! Kidding. A+
Rating: * * * * *