Pokemon
by Max McNair
"ha ha haa you cant beat me".yelled the gym leader."is that so then choose your next pokemon".replied the challenger."ill squash you with-click.boring,just boring."muttered Tam."Hey I was watching that!"cried out Ricky."oh be my guest"the screen flickered and the show resumed."I'm going for a walk than"Tam announced but Ricky was already engulfed in the show.tam strapped on his belt and walked to the door.casually he opened it and walked out in to the fresh night air closing the door behind him.he set off down the unpaved path.
the stars gleamed un-nusaly bright tonight.thought tam as he gazed up at then.the air suddenly got colder.tam shivered as he pulled up his jacket.a rustle in the bushes gave tam a startle .he dove for the cover of a large bush and snahed poke ball from his belt."thank you" "no help me some one,help"a young voice cried."I'm afraid you have no choice,HAND OVER YOUR POKEMON...NO help me help me"once again the voice of a ..girl was heard."no is correct"tam yelled.no the two were on the path.tam stepped out."hitmonchan go."tam sent the poke ball flying at the criminal.hitmonchan flu out."mon chan""Who are you?"asked the criminal."What th--"BANG"hitmonchans fist hit him square in the noose."oh playing it like that than,GO HYPNO"at once the power of hypno fell heavily on hitmonchan."Hitmochan rocket punch NOW"a fiery glove hit hypno and took him down."hypno hypnosis attack"hitmonchans speed dramatically dropped.and so did tams.
Review: Great story. Very cool.
Grade: B+
Rating: * *