The Pokemon Team Of Great Destruction

by DonkeyKong54

Hi. My name is Diddy. I�m trying to become the greatest Pokemon trainer (to compete with my goofy dad, Donkey.) Here is what my loyal Pokemon and I went through to win the first Pokemon battle that we�d participated in. Oh, yeah, and I�m NOT a monkey.

I woke up one morning and got ready for the Pokemon battle contest. I slipped into my shirt and hat and went out to the living room. �Diddy, do you want some breakfast?� my mother asked. �Yeah, lay it on me.� I replied. My mom gave me breakfast and I gobbled it down like a pig. I was about to head out the door when�

�Diddy, do you have your Lapras, Arbok, Charizard, and Gengar?� My dad asked. �Yeah, they�re in the Pokeballs.� I said. �Do you have your Pokeballs?� he asked. �Yes, they�re in my pocket.� I said. �Where�s your pocket?� he asked. I looked down at my pants but saw my underwear instead. �Oh...yeah...� I blushed as I said this. I ran upstairs and put my pants on.

I went to the contest, and my opponent was Klobber, (weird name) and he challenged me with Beedrill. I slammed my Charizard�s Pokeball down and he popped out. �CHHHAAARRR!!!� he said. �Beedrill, mega drain!!� Klobber ordered. Beedrill used mega drain and Charizard used Flamethrower. Beedrill fainted.

Next I battled. BulbaBoy and he challenged me with three Bulbasaurs which I easily beat with Arbok �Arbok, poison sting!!� I ordered. �AAAARRRRBBBOOOOKKK!!� he said and stung them all. They fainted.

Now I was face to face with Joey, who liked to be called by �Gohan� and he sent out Golem and I challenged him with my Gengar. �Golem, rock throw!!� he yelled and Golem thew rocks at Gengar. Gengar used night shade and left Golem with half life. Golem used confuse ray and my Gengar tripped over its own foot. Then I yelled �Gengar, use strength!!� It obeyed and, once the attack was over, Golem fainted.

Lastly, I battled NidoKiddo with his Nidoking and Nidoqueen. I used Lapras (my weakest Pokemon.) Nidoking used mega punch and Lapras used watergun. Nidoking was still alive, so I put him to sleep with metronome, since metronome made Lapras use lullaby. Nidoking fell asleep and Lapras destroyed it with aroura beam. �Nidoqueen, tackle him!!� NidoKiddo said, and Nidoqueen used tackle. Lapras was almost dead, and then I used hydro pump. Nidoqueen used tri attack but it missed. �Lapras, Hyperbeam!� I said and Lapras shot Hyperbeam at Nidoqueen, knocking her out.

The judge ran out of his little judging chamber. �The winner of this battle is Diddy!!� he announced. He gave me a medal and healed my Pokemon. I walked home in fame and my loyal Pokemon followed.

THE END

Review: Very good. Some mistakes, but it�s good. I like the names you�ve come up with, but my favorite is �NidoKiddo.� Now, �Klobber,� I�ve found, is a barrel dwelling Kremling from Donkey Kong Country 2: Diddy�s Kong Quest. But hey, I like Klobber!! ESPECIALLY da red one!!! BOOM!!!! But, why is your �author�s name� DonkeyKong54, and you�re telling the story as Diddy? Oh, well. No big deal. Grade: A+ Rating: * * * * *