THE LEGEND OF ROBO MEWTWO

by Ryan

As I,Ryan,was walking along with my pokemon i notice that everything was realy quiet.My pokemon,Mewtwo,Gyarados,Onix,Venusaur,Charizard,and Blastoise,were out of their pokeballs and walking with me(these pokemon are my six that I use in the game.)The sky was turning a black color.All m y pokemon were looking around like they knew something was wrong.And all of a sudden I heard my mom yell,"Ryan get in here."And I said,"O.k. mom."I walked in the house and on the news was a report saying that a metior was going to hit them.And my mom said,"What!?"And my mom just walked up to her room crying.Mewtwo asked me,"Is there anything we can do about that?"(Mewtwo is the only pokemon to speak English) I shook my head "no".Venusaur said,"Venu saur?"(English:How could this happen?)The all my pokemon started to talk together in pokemon language.Then Mewtwo came up to me and said,"We,your pokemon,have came up with that we could shoot the meteor with all of our attacks and maybe it will blow up in outer space."I said,"Lets give it a try."And all of my pokemon cheered.We went to where the news said that where the metior was going to hit.It was in Vermillion city.So we whent there and we were ready to have at it. TO BE CONTINUED

Review: This is an OK story. Could do with some editing, but other than that, it�s good. Is this your first story? If so, it�s great for a first one. My first story was Moon Stone Cubone, which I can tell you, it stinks. Grade: B+ Rating: * *