Alakazam Scrams

by CJW022687

I was in the poke center just lieing around playing with my pokedex when all the sudden I saw a shadow move out side of the center so I went and checked it out then I saw a girl who seemed vagouly fammiliar run past me. " come back you stupid pokemon she yelled" then I asked who are you and when she turned around it was Jesse I quickly pulled out my Raichu and Thunder bolted her then with my Ivysaur I rapped her up with vine whip. she said ouch then I asked Hey why were you chaseing that pokemon? then she answered I stole it fare and square and a couple minutes ago it told me i was treating it wrong so it ran. What was it i asked? Alakazam she answered. whan she said that Alakazam came out of the shadows Alakazam it said I pulled out Haunter and did hypnosis but alakazam did pshycic my Haunter got hurt then I sent Arbok and did wrap attack and i squezed alakazam then Raichu went out and did quick attack I threw I pokeball and alakazam went inside it bounced 1..........2............3.........4..then stopped I jumped upp and yeelled yah!

Review: Great story. Needs some corrections, but very good story. Grade: B+ Rating: * *