The Legend Of The Mystery Birds
by Miguel a.k.a. Eggy
One day Ash,Misty,Brock, and Pikachu were walking to the Pokemon League
just winning a Earth badge from the Viridian Gym leader. It rained so hard
that they didnt had any shelter but they saw this little cabin. Which was
empty and they stayed there. Brock was preaparing hot cocoa for all of them.
Then they heard a strange noise very loud it was like birds fighting but when
they went outside and check it out there was nothing absoulety nothing. Then
they were resting in the cabin putting a little fire. Then while they were
slepping they heard a bird singing but very loud. They went outside and they
saw a big flame outside. Ash thought it may be a pokemon so pointed the
pokedex to the pokemon and pokedex said. "Moltres, a rare pokemon there is no
more data on this pokemon. , Then the bird threw a power like a fire storm
and they were amaze and Misty got Ash's hand and hugging him very tight she
was scared. Then one little flame hitted Pikachu he was hurt and they took
him back to the cabin. Then they heard another bird and they went outside
again and they saw this big ice ball in the air Ash took his pokedex and it
said. " Articuno, a rare pokemon there is no more data on this pokemon. Then
Articuno threw a power like a blizzard so they went back in the cabin. Then
they heard another bird he got his pokedex and it said. Zapdos, a rare
pokemon there is no more data on this pokemon. it look so beutiful that Misty
gave Ash a kiss on the cheek and Ash got very shy and then the most
magnificent thing Zapdos did a thunder which light up everything. Then they
could see thatthe 3 birds were leaving away.
Review: Pretty good. Nice piece, there is a lot of attitude in this story.
Grade: A+
Rating: * * * * *